Tried & True #13 – The Director’s Horrifying Rewrite

© Pixelbliss - Fotolia.comWhen I think about Friday the 13th and all of its horror, I can’t help but consider the horrifying feeling a writer gets when the director starts hacking at his work. It gets even more complicated when the writer is the director and a part of a team of writers, which is my case with Tried & True.

For the past two weeks I dove into my script analysis from a director’s vantage point. I found a dozen scenes that didn’t move the story forward and I also found half dozen scenes that need to be added to the story – All to focus the story more tightly on the protagonist.

Ruthless Script Analysis

I do several analysis passes on a script in order to prepare for filming and discussions with each of my department heads. During the process, it becomes obvious which scenes are cinematic and which ones would make for a nice Movie of the Week (MOW).

My standard is to make the story so fascinating and cinematic that it has to play on the big screen. I also want to make sure the story is easy to follow and any complexities are used more as a garnish for the discerning viewer, rather than a plot interrupter for those who can’t or choose not to follow such details.

What I find interesting about the process is how many scenes stay intact with minor changes that tweak the perspective. I expect the pacing of the film to increase with the add precision or focus on the main character’s goals, but no matter how many times I’ve done this I’m always amazed at the new clarity that rises within the plotlines.

Complex stories always fail at the box office, but simple stories surrounded in a complexity of details do extremely well. It’s like listening to a great speaker. If he’s on point with his message, no matter how many supporting facts or stories he shares, people will always walk away knowing his specific three points with a desire to implement his recommendation.

Horrifying Cuts Bring Happiness

So the hacking began and I noticed a slight twitch in my pride. It was hard cutting scenes, but the final read was well worth it. Not to mention the benefits of reducing the page count to something more palatable for a courtroom drama.

I also noticed that the process helped me catch the typical contrived scenes that always seep into family friendly films. While these trite scenes have no place in a drama, they are endearing and hard to cut. The only solace received from cutting these scenes comes from the fact that no one notices they were cut. In other words, since they didn’t advance the story they couldn’t be missed.

Considering what elements in a scene must remain or be shifted to another scene makes for an interesting process. I sometimes wonder if I completely deleted a scene would it impact or change the story. If there is no impact, then it is one that must be cut. If, however, a couple elements are important, but could be relocated, then the scene is also worth cutting.

It’s only when the scene elements are so well integrated into the scene and critically important to the story that I have to keep it in the script. In those cases, I may have to find a way to punch up the scene to something worthy of the silver screen, or reanalyze the story structure to make sure I hadn’t veered off the path of clarity.

Horrified Co-Writers

One of the biggest issues during the analysis process is making sure you do something to save face for the other writers. I’m fortunate with Tried & True screenwriter Guy Cote, as he is always willing to bend on scene content when the replacement idea is far better or more focused than the previous draft.

Producer Anthony DeRosa is also willing to bend if he knows the scene works better for our audience. Since the film was written for Millennials, with added scenes that will help the Baby Boomers to embrace the story, we have quite the fine line to walk in how each scene is presented.

As for the Gen X audience, they too should be pleased with the story, but none of the scene elements were created with them in mind. However, GenXers are very resilient from having to play middleman between the Millennials and Baby Boomers that they will certainly be able to enjoy the story, if not embrace it.

Well, its time to get back to the script, as I’m still trying to figure out how to get rid of one last contrived scene. I’m hoping to shift into preproduction in the near future with the hopes that we can begin filming in late August or early September. So, the only real horror would be if I couldn’t have the script ready in time. Happy Friday the 13th.

Copyright © 2014 by CJ Powers

The 8 Powerful Techniques that Influence Your Future

CapturedI was sucked in. I couldn’t break free from the moment. It was alarming to me. After all, I understood the techniques used by the media to manipulate those who didn’t take time for conscious consideration of their media intake. It actually snuck up on me last Saturday morning.

I lounged in bed reading numerous Internet articles on my iPad. The sun had already lit up my room, the birds were singing and I was comfy enough to stay put. I easily jumped from article to article, some humorous and others curiously addicting. After about an hour, I couldn’t help but notice that I continually was captured by one particular publication.

The ezine grabbed my attention from numerous locations. It didn’t matter if I started on Facebook, Flipbook or Instagram. Every time one of their articles was shared, I felt compelled to read it. I had been captured by my own curiosity and leveraged by the marketers who published the blog entries.

The answer to being influenced suddenly popped up in an article titled The Anatomy of a Perfect Blog Post. Author Kevin Lee wrote about the sciences used in capturing readers and generating shares. Social Media had matured to the point of using science to influence its readers.

The techniques were simple enough and had proven effective in my life until I gave careful consideration to what I was actually reading. It was only then that I regained control of the amount of impact the influential articles could make in my life. Here are the main categories I learned about.

How to Write the Perfect Headline

The science of testing and retesting a reader’s response to headlines shows that people scan the first three words and the last three words. This suggests that a six-word headline gets perfect readership. Since this is close to impossible to achieve with many blog entries, marketers tested other aspects of headline readership and came up with the ultimate headline formula.

Number + Adjective + Keyword + Rationale + Promise = The Ultimate Headline

Start Your Post with Storytelling

StoriesBlogs that start with a story obtain about 300% more readership than a post without a story. Blogs sharing a story in the beginning of the article keep their readers 520% longer than those without a story. This makes sense to me, as by nature our society loves to hear or read a good story.

Reduce Characters Per Line by Using Images

The fewer number of characters used on a page shortens the eye movement and increases the reader’s comprehension. In other words, its better to use a picture that takes up half the column and reduces the number of words running across the page than it is to use a full column width.

Use Lots of Subheadings

The use of subheadings allows the blog article to be easily scanned. This scan ability gives the reader a quick understanding about what elements of your thoughts shared might be important to them. It also lays out your ideas in an easy way to understand much like a book or speech outline – Adding to the readers comprehension and consideration of your ideas.

Write the Perfect Length of Content

Blog posts of 1,500 words receive more shares than shorter articles. My guess is that it’s long enough to provide substantial content that’s worth sharing. This also puts the time of readership around seven minutes, which is just under the 8-12 minute window we can handle watching on TV – That’s why commercials interrupt your show every 8-12 minutes.

Add Tweetables When Possible

By making your post quotable, people will Tweet your comments. This is now done by placing a “Tweet This” or “Share This” link alongside the text. The old fashion way is to manually code a Tweet link.

Time Your Post for the Weekend

5 Steps to Take an Idea to ScriptSaturdays and Sundays get far more readership of blogs than any other day. This is due mostly to the lack of blogs published on weekends. Less competition means more readership, not to mention that weekends provide more time for people lounging in bed with their iPads.

A Call to Action

Topping off the list of techniques is a call to action. Suggesting that people do something about what they read inspires them to embrace what you’ve shared, especially if it is actionable, relatable, urgent, visual, solution-based, entertaining and definitive.

So, there you have it. The 8 techniques that caught me off guard. The only way I found to counter its effect, was to give the articles I read my conscious consideration, which put me back into the drivers seat and slowed my compulsory reading.

I hope you’ve found this information interesting and that you add these tools into your readership tool belt so you know when someone is trying to influence you. It’s only then that you can purposely take time to consider if you’ll receive and embrace the message to improve your life or discard it to protect it.

3 Types of Objectives that Lead to Failure

My business journey has given me significant experiences in retail, corporate and manufacturing. As a certified Six Sigma consultant I’ve managed hundreds of millions of dollars and as a salesperson I’ve closed $2.3B in deals. While this might sound impressive to some, it is not.

In all of my business experiences, I’ve learned, albeit the hard way at times, that ALL success is driven by proactively achieving realistic and measureable objectives – Nothing more. It doesn’t matter if you get paid $8.25 an hour or you receive six figure bonuses. I can assure you that the same business principles work at all levels and in every industry.

I can also assure you that there are three types of objectives that lead to failure and hurt the business.

1. The Unpublished Firestorm

During my tenure at a large box retail store I found myself receiving a disciplinary notice in writing. This was soon after I had converted many markdowns into credits, which I thought was worthy of a pat on the back rather than a negative performance review. However, it turned out that I was not meeting my unpublished objectives.

Apparently my partial training did not prepare me for working the objectives I was never given. Nor did I have any metrics to meet; yet I was being judged by specific measurements listed in my disciplinary notice. The discussion that accompanied the paperwork clarified that I was also to be making certain business decisions without the help of others, or the help of business parameters that would guide standard business decision processes.

I was, however, told in the beginning that I would have 90 days to become fully operational. That magic date triggered the disciplinary measures. Unfortunately, the entire store was in a firestorm of activity during the busy season when I was hired. This forced me to learn most of what I did through osmosis and observation.

The great news about the disciplinary notice is that it forced circumstances that helped me to understand my unpublished objectives. The bad news is that the process forced several levels above me to learn for the first time that I existed, but as a problem child, not one that was converting markdowns, shrink and returns into credits.

The lesson I learned – Assert to have your supervisor measure your work ONLY on published, achievable, realistic, and measurable objectives that you both agree on.

2. The Everyone-Wins Pretense

I spent a lot of time in the Fortune 50 world both as an employee and a consultant. Everything I did was about published metrics, which was far better than trying to meet unpublished objectives. However, the metrics I was assigned were so full of fluff that it didn’t drive any specific business behaviors or decisions.

It’s common for businesses to shift and move with the market, but it’s just as uncommon for upper management to allow for the metrics and objectives to flex to the ever changing business drivers. This is due in part to how bonuses are structured.

The end result is the establishment of objectives that are so soft that any successful activity will appear to be an achievement. These types of objectives are merely in place to meet the redtape requirements of the corporation and in no way drive the business.

At the beginning of every year I was to put my measurable objectives in writing. Then the document would go up the flagpole and trickle back down with so many fluff words that any good executive could make my performance seem spot on or like I missed it by a mile, depending on my social/political position at the time.

This was done to support the executive’s goals. If the team succeeded, the documentation proved that the execs were smart, excellent planners and drove the business in the exact way they had predetermined. And, if the team failed, the documentation would easily point out which worker held the team back from success and needed to be put on a performance improvement plan.

The lesson I learned – Assert to have your executives measure your work ONLY on published, achievable, realistic, and measurable objectives that you both agree on.

3. The Zealous Ambiguity

I was brought on board to consult during the development of a start up company’s business plan. The first draft read incredibly well and its design was not only functional, but artist. At first glance, it was a business worth investing in. That is, until I read the objectives.

The objectives were actually goals or vision statements. There were no measurements to hold anyone accountable and the budget didn’t come close to supporting the enthusiastic ideals set forth. Yet some how, the zealous ambiguity that normal companies wouldn’t be able to achieve in less than ten years with twenty times the budget, seemed compelling and therefore worth investing in.

However, a second read of the material made me realize that the executives had no clue what they wanted or how they were going to achieve it. Their natural charisma and vision covered for their inability to convert ideals into practical and measureable actions.

After sitting down and talking through each of the twelve key objectives, we tossed out all but two. We then determined the strategies and action plans required to specifically achieve those two, now measureable objectives and built a realistic budget. The end result was a start up cost of four times the initial budget – But it was now actually achievable.

The lesson I learned – Assert to have your clients measure their work ONLY on published, achievable, realistic, and measurable objectives that you both agree on.

The goal of an objective should be to measure reality for the sole reason of methodically reproducing the successes and turning around the failures. Anything less is merely a political or ignorant game that increases shareholder risk. Unfortunately, most directives are not geared toward improving the business model and its success, but rather are put in place to quickly find scapegoats and cover for executives who have no idea how to run their business.

Copyright © 2014 by CJ Powers