Johnny’s Thanksgiving

With Thanksgiving around the corner, I thought I’d share the first story I ever wrote with you…

The snow was lightly falling outside of the big picture window where little Johnny was leaning against the back of the couch. His eyes were sparkling at the sight of a small fawn crossing his grandfather’s snow covered lawn in the north woods of Wisconsin.

The smell of turkey snuck up behind Johnny as his grandmother kissed him on the back of his head on her way to the dinning room table with the platter. Johnny spun around catching a glimpse of the golden brown turkey, as it was set onto the table in between the sweet potato and dressing.

Johnny kicked his feetsy pajama covered feet out and dropped with his seat landing squarely on the couch. He slipped off the edge and took his place at the dinning room table next to grandma.

In place of a traditional prayer, grandpa suggested each person take a few moments and thank God for the simple things for which they were thankful. Grandpa thanked God for his job, new car and having the family over for Thanksgiving. Grandma thanked the Lord for His provisions and the family. Johnny’s mom thanked God for his new little sister who was partially covered by a small blanket as she was already enjoying her dinner.

It was Johnny’s turn and he leaned back in his chair and took pause. The others were curious and wondered what was going on in his little mind. He thought and he thought, bringing smiles of anticipation to each one setting at the table.

“I wonder what Daddy is thankful for,” questioned Johnny.

A warm smile came over everyone in the old Chicago gym where Johnny’s dad was dishing up turkey for the homeless. A tear of joy rolled down the cheek of a mother holding a small child on her hip. A man with long stringy hair and a stubble face smiled as he received the turkey leg. An old woman reached out her shriveled hand and patted Johnny’s dad on the shoulder, “Thank you for giving up what you are thankful for, so we might be thankful as well.”

Johnny smiled and said, “I’m thankful for my dad and I’m going to grow up and be just like him.”

And so, that Thanksgiving day everyone found something to be thankful for and shared with each other generously from the depths of their hearts.

Copyright © 2005, 2011 by CJ Powers
All Rights Reserved.
Illustration © Kelly Hironaka – Fotolia.com

Interviews from the Movie “J. Edgar”

It’s time for Oscars® contenders to battle. The number one contender this season is Clint Eastwood, who was honored for his work with two Oscars® in the category of Best Director, for “Million Dollar Baby” and “Unforgiven.”
 Clint pulled together an incredible team for the new movie “J. Edgar,” due out on November 9th in limited release and on the 11th for its full release.

“J. Edgar” explores his personal and public life from Edgar’s perspective, revealing a man who could distort the truth as easily as he upheld it, based on his own idea of justice.

The team is made up of screenwriter and Oscar® winner Dustin Lance Black (“Milk”).

Academy Award® nominee Leonardo DiCaprio (“Inception,” “The Aviator”) as Edgar. Academy Award® nominee Naomi Watts (“21 Grams”) and Oscar® winner Judi Dench (“Shakespeare in Love”) help make this film a worthy contender.

However, with a great team supporting his efforts, Eastwood remains humble concerning the film. Eastwood says, “What made the story so interesting and, I hope, carries over to the movie, is that you get to know Hoover well enough that you understand him, his love for his mother, his need to protect the country, his relationship with Tolson…all the things that make up a life. He was more than the Director of the FBI, he was a complex guy. I hope we can draw people into his world so that, for a couple of hours, they see history through his eyes.”

The points in history explored stretch across Edgar’s lifetime and required a range of clothing highlighting the unique styles of the 20s, 30s and 60s. DiCaprio had to undergo hours of old-age prosthetic make-up.

“To take somebody from his mid-twenties to his seventies is an interesting challenge,” remarks make-up artist Sian Grigg. “Leo was never going to look exactly like Hoover because he has a totally different face, but he has a great face to work with. I used mouth appliances to help change the shape of his face, applied a prosthetic neck appliance to give him a double chin, and inserted a nose augmenter to deform his nose a little bit, all to get him closer to looking like Hoover. His hair stylist, Kathy Blondell, dyed his hair brown and added gray hairpieces at various stages; she even plucked out some of the hair in his widow’s peak to give him a squarer hairline.”

The team worked hard to make sure the audience focused on the story, not the actors. “This is a story about relationships,” Eastwood says, “intimate interactions between Hoover and everyone around him, from those closest to him—Clyde Tolson, Helen Gandy, his mother—all the way to Robert Kennedy and other well known political figures, even presidents. If it had just been a biopic, I don’t think I would have wanted to do it. I like relationship pictures, I like exploring why people do or did certain things in their lives.”

“This was one of the most challenging characters I’d ever seen on the page,” DiCaprio says of Black’s script, which spanned Hoover’s entire professional life. “Communism was almost like a terrorist movement in Hoover’s eyes, and he battled it and other perceived enemies throughout his career.”

This film is poised for several Oscar nominations and will be one of this year’s best pictures. After all, it’s about a man that changed the way we enforce the law.

Young Edgar, “Imagine if every citizen in the country was uniquely identifiable with their own card and number, say, the pattern on their fingers. Imagine how quickly they could be found when they committed a crime.”

Developing Paradoxical Characters

Making a character interesting drives the audience’s desire to follow his or her goals and outcomes. The audience wants to get behind a character and cheer them on, but they must first be drawn to them in a unique way that inspires exploration of the character. This is best accomplished by using a paradox within the character’s life or personality.

M.A.S.H. was known for it’s paradoxical characters. Alan Alda’s character of Hawkeye was diametrically opposed to war and wanted no part of it, yet every time he desired to go AWOL, the loudspeaker would announce the in coming wounded and stop him in his tracks. Hawkeye was drawn to the operating room because saving lives was more important than his hatred of war.

These two opposing drivers made his character enjoyable to watch and raised numerous questions in the minds of the audience. They needed to understand what made him tick. During its eleven seasons, people came to love Hawkeye even though they never knew what to expect next, yet his consistency was amazing.

The best way to develop an interesting character is by starting with his flaw. This flaw will have a visible action associated with it to play well on screen. To add strength to the character, it’s important to never explain the flaw, but just demonstrate it. The actions should be divided up into three distinct visuals.

What the flaw causes him to do in:
1. Public
2. A small group of friends
3. Private

Once in place, the dialog can be used to create further conflict or raise additional questions with the audience. The visuals will help connect the various demonstrated flaw elements to the character in a way that the audience can understand. This makes change or growth in the character at a later point in the story much easier, as all you have to do is change the visual – Cluing in the audience that he has changed his ways.

The best way to express the paradox throughout the show is to take the flaw and determine what it might look like as a blessing. For instance, the person who can be stubborn can also persevere. Perseverance can look very similar to stubbornness, but with a positive spin. Hawkeye hated war because too many people died, yet being a surgeon kept him from leaving the war because if he left, too many people would die.

The paradox within his character was based on the same flaw, which was developed throughout his life. It was his Achilles’ heel or the basis of his human condition – The part of him we all fell in love with.

Creating a person who is good and gets better by the end of the film does nothing for the audience. It’s only when we see and understand their humanity and flaws that we can relate and then cheer them on to grow into a mature and rich life. We love rags to riches stories, not rich to filthy rich stories. In this case, I’m speaking of the richness of their character development, but financially speaking we would find the same to hold true.

So, try writing a flawed character that you can turn into an overcomer. Create that person who can turn their flaw into a positive. Turn that stubborn person into the one who perseveres long enough for help to arrive during the scenes of the downed airplane.

Or, maybe you want that shy person to be the only one that listens well enough to figure out the answer that spares a man’s life in the eleventh hour. Or, the scrawny kid that constantly gets ridiculed until the day they are locked in a closet of a burning house and the kid is the only one to make it through the vent to get help and unlock the door to free the others seconds before affixation.

Finding a paradox gives the audience plenty of entertainment and gives the writer lots of creative thoughts worth pursuing. It is a great form of character development that every writer needs to embrace. It’s also a character that can provide substantial irony for the audiences entertainment.

Copyright © 2011 By CJ Powers