Blog Entry Spoken into Existence

This blog is being written by voice command. It is a new feature offered by Apple computers and the latest version of Mountain Lion software. It’s designed to allow the operator to speak their thoughts at a quicker pace than they could type. I find it a bit awkward, as I’m used to thinking and typing when I construct my sentences.

New technology always gets my mind reeling about its many possible uses. For instance, if I were giving a lecture or speaking at a conference, I could possibly record my voice and make a book available by the end of the conference. It would include the exact information I shared, similar to a published transcript of the event.

Many speakers are aware that certain ideas pop into their mind during the middle of a talk and each one of those new thoughts could be captured in real time for a future book. Unfortunately the bandwidth and the database size aren’t sufficient enough to keep up with a speaker. But, it would give the speaker an opportunity to work from the written text of their talk without first having to transcribe it from an audio file or videotape.

This new technology takes time to get used to as well as practice. The more I’m using it, the easier it gets. Aside from the convenience factor that might make it appealing, I can still type a lot faster than I can speak, while constructing new literary thoughts in my head. There is something about the process that makes the old way work better for me.

I’m not opposed to speaking my text instead of typing it, but what I say and how I say it seems to be significantly different than how I think and write. Even after speaking this blog into existence, I found myself going back to the keyboard to make alterations for readability. In fact, I found that typing this paragraph took me half the amount of time than each of the above spoken paragraphs. Of course, that could be due to my experience and comfort level in the old process.

The only other issue that I struggle with is speaking text out loud, which requires a room with less noise than I have at times. It might also require more privacy. Since most of my blogs were typed during my morning train commute, I would find it difficult speaking out loud and disturbing those around me. After all, they didn’t ask me to share my ideas with them.

The Dark Knight Rises — Review

This closing installment of the Christopher Nolan trilogy has been hailed as the best of the Batman movies. The story is cinematic with a substantial amount of the film shot on the 70-millimeter IMAX format. This redemptive epic has Batman imprisoned and finding himself inspiring several key people including Catwoman, to turn to the good and help him stop the evil Bane who has taken control of Gotham.

Batman and Bane BattleThis is one of the few movies that clearly states the differences between right and wrong, while giving the audience and explosive, entertaining and most riveting time. However, this comic book character becomes larger than life in this adventurous drama and the intense action violence might be too strong for children.

Filmmakers, fans and even the less interested will find this cinematic wonder transforming villains, bringing people to hope and faith, and lifting up good to be victorious. The story also puts communist tyranny and revolution into a proper perspective, or bad light, by contrasting it with self-sacrificing and loyal people.

Nolan's Crowning AchievementNolan’s crowning achievement in this trilogy deserves every dollar it makes at the box office, but might be greatly hindered by those fearful of attending due to the shooting in Aurora, Colorado at the opening last night. The count, as of this writing, was 14 dead and 50 wounded after tear gas was released into a packed theater during the midnight show when 50 – 60 shots were fired.

The hospitals have reported treating victims with an age range of 6 – 31. It was reported that one woman and her boyfriend “crawled and then ran for an exit.” A witness talked with her after the experience and then reported to KUSA, “When she turned around, all she saw was the guy slowly making his way up the stairs, just firing. … Just picking random people.”

Salina Jordan, 19, told the Denver Post she saw one girl struck in the cheek and others in the stomach, including a girl who looked to be around 9 years old.

It is my hope that theaters provide extra security in the coming weeks. Or better yet, that Warner Brothers pulls the film from distribution out of respect for the dead and re-release it later this fall. And when released, I hope that everyone attends this movie that makes a clear statement between good and evil. After all, those who hold to some level of faith and values will find the film to be an epic hit.

My condolences to the family’s of those who lost their lives and to the wounded, whose lives are forever changed. May you be comforted during the weeks ahead and may concerned people rise up for the good of our communities and make it clear that we will no longer stand for the destructive ways of others.

Copyright © 2012 By CJ Powers
Photos © Warner Bros. Pictures

The 3X5 Brainstorming Effect

I taught writing workshops last weekend at the Karitos Art Festival. My classes were filled with artists desiring to take their skills to a new higher level. The participation was excellent and the class was filled with laughter, knowledge and real examples that made several feel like they could achieve more than they had thought possible.

One screenwriter was amazed at how easy her story flowed after implementing a simple technique that I want to share in this blog. I call it the “3X5 card brainstorming effect.”

STEP ONE: Review your great Logline and come up with as many scene ideas as possible. Write each idea on a 3X5 card and stick it randomly on the wall. Do not spend too much time writing details on the cards, but write enough to jog the memory of the scene created during the brainstorming session.

STEP TWO: Once Step One has been exhausted, read the Logline again from the viewpoint of an old lady. Again, quickly write each idea on a card and randomly post it on the wall.

STEP THREE: Continue Step Two using different perspectives. Write from the vantage point of a child, prison guard, chimney sweep, etc. Each perspective will give new insights into various key elements that will make up the final story.

STEP FOUR: Review the wall of cards and organize them into logical groupings, patterns or linear thought tracks. Determine which cards support the theme of the story and mark them accordingly. Determine what cards move the story forward and mark them for plot “A”.

STEP FIVE: Organize the cards into 8 sequences that tell the best story. Make sure there is a linear flow to the story by adding in transition cards or salting in “B” or “C” plot cards.

STEP SIX: Turn each card into a paragraph so it reads like a story. Sit back, relax and read the story to see if it is entertaining, poignant or riveting. Change the paragraphs that don’t move the story forward and keep the ones that build a desire to read the next paragraph. Anything that is great, but doesn’t seem to fit, place it in a draw for your next project.

These six simple steps make the building of the first draft’s story structure fun and imaginative. It’s a fast process that allows the writer to quickly explore an idea to determine if it has enough merit to deserve hundreds of hours developing it into a story for the silver screen. And, it saves a lot of wasted time on those great concepts that don’t flesh out well enough to be worthy of more time.